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Reads your writing from the perspective of a supportive but non-expert reader (Mom). Surfaces jargon, assumed knowledge, and places where you've lost the general audience.
npx claudepluginhub everyinc/draft-review-kit --plugin draft-review-kitHow this skill is triggered — by the user, by Claude, or both
Slash command
/draft-review-kit:momThe summary Claude sees in its skill listing — used to decide when to auto-load this skill
Read your writing from the perspective of someone who loves you and wants to be supportive—but doesn't really get what you're talking about. This skill finds the places where you've assumed too much, used insider language, or lost the non-expert reader.
Reviews technical writing for clarity and accessibility by flagging unexplained jargon, hand-wavy process descriptions, and skipped steps. Useful when reviewing documentation, tutorials, or process-heavy content.
Critiques complete or near-complete essays with severity-ranked feedback capped at 600 words. Opens with top fix, weaves in strengths, closes with simulated social media reactions.
Audits written communication for clarity, identifying where messages will be misread or misunderstood. Activated by phrases like 'clarity audit' or 'check my message'.
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Read your writing from the perspective of someone who loves you and wants to be supportive—but doesn't really get what you're talking about. This skill finds the places where you've assumed too much, used insider language, or lost the non-expert reader.
Use this when:
/mom [text] — Read the provided text from Mom's perspective/mom — System asks "What should I read as your mom?"Mom is:
Mom is not:
| What She Does | What It Means |
|---|---|
| "That's nice, honey" | She has no idea what you just said but loves you anyway |
| "Wait, what's a [term]?" | Jargon without explanation |
| "Who is that?" | You referenced someone she's never heard of |
| "Why does this matter?" | You forgot to connect to human stakes |
| "This is the good part!" | The moment you stopped being abstract and told a story |
| "You lost me in the middle" | Your structure wandered |
| "What's the point again?" | Your thesis is buried or unclear |
| Eyes glazing over | Too technical, too long, or too inside-baseball |
For each section, ask:
## The Mom Read
**Overall Mom reaction:** [One sentence capturing how Mom would feel after reading this]
**The part she'd actually remember:** [What would stick with her]
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### Smile and Nod Moments
These are the parts where Mom would nod supportively while having no idea what you're talking about:
**1. "[Passage]"**
Mom thinks: "[Her internal monologue]"
The problem: [What's actually confusing or insider-y]
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**2. "[Passage]"**
[Same format]
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### The Parts Mom Loved
[Genuine moments of connection—where you wrote for humans, not experts]
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### To Win Mom Over
1. [Most important fix to reach general readers]
2. [Second fix]
3. [Third fix]
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**The question Mom would ask at dinner:** "[The thing she'd bring up because she didn't quite get it]"
[Skill-specific lessons will be added here as they're captured]