mind-writing-style

Writing Style (mind-writing-style)

Mind prizes prose that makes a rigorous argument easy to follow. Authors are explicitly asked to present arguments so they are accessible to a broad readership among philosophers, and where technical material appears, to accompany it with informal exposition. This skill is about clarity and economy at the sentence level — not about generating claims (that is mind-thesis-and-argument).

When to trigger

• Drafting the introduction or doing a final clarity pass
• A reader said the prose is "dense," "hard to follow," or "only specialists can read it"
• A formal passage needs an informal gloss
• Over the word limit and needing to cut words without losing the argument

Write for a broad philosophical readership

1. Plain, exact prose. Short declarative sentences for the key moves. Say the claim, then support it. Avoid ornament that hides the inference.
2. Gloss every technicality. When you introduce symbolism, a formal definition, or a term of art, immediately restate the point in ordinary language. A philosopher outside your subfield should follow the argument.
3. Argument-first sentences. Lead with the claim, then the reason — not a wind-up that buries it. Make the logical connective explicit ("so," "because," "but," "therefore").
4. Define on first use; one term per concept. Do not let a concept drift across two words, or one word cover two concepts (guards against the equivocation mind-conceptual-analysis-and-method flags).
5. Quote sparingly and purposefully. Use a quotation to fix the target view precisely, not to fill space; analyze every quotation you include.

Mechanics

• Prefer the active voice and concrete subjects; name who claims what.
• Numbered premises or labeled claims (P1, P2, …) aid the reader when the argument is intricate.
• Keep footnotes for genuine qualifications and sources, not for a parallel essay.
• One consistent citation style throughout (full conversion to MIND house style happens in mind-citation-and-style).

Fit the ~8,000-word limit

• Cut hedging, throat-clearing, and re-explanation of views the reader knows.
• Replace a long paraphrase of an opponent with one precise sentence (or a short quotation).
• Every sentence should advance or clarify the argument; delete decoration.
• Tighten footnotes — discursive notes are where the word count quietly grows.

Anti-patterns

• Dense, clause-stacked sentences that hide the inference
• Formalism with no plain-language gloss (against Mind's stated expectation)
• Burying the thesis in qualifications before it is even stated
• Long block quotations left unanalyzed
• A term that shifts meaning mid-paper

Style execution pass for Mind

Use this as a second-pass capability check. First lock the target thesis, argument map, objection sequence, and dialectical payoff; then test whether the manuscript addresses analytic-philosophy reviewers who expect a precise thesis, live objection, argument structure, and contribution to an active debate.

• Primary move: Rewrite the opening and transitions so the venue-level claim, evidence object, and contribution are visible before technical detail.
• Decision ledger: return claim / evidence / blocker / next edit rows so the next pass can patch the manuscript directly.
• Neighbor test: compare against Philosophical Review for broader top philosophy, Nous for analytic breadth, Ethics for normative/political theory; if the neighboring outlet has the stronger audience claim, recommend re-routing before polishing.
• Verification floor: before submission-ready advice, re-open resources/official-source-map.md for volatile rules and name the one unresolved fact that could change the recommendation.

Output format

【Reads for a broad audience?】jargon glossed / formalism explained? [Y/N]
【Thesis clear early?】[Y/N]
【Argument-first prose?】connectives explicit? [Y/N]
【Within ~8,000 words?】[Y/N] — where to trim
【Quotations purposeful + analyzed?】[Y/N]
【Next】mind-citation-and-style

Supplementary resources

• ../../resources/external_tools.md — typesetting (LaTeX lineno, Word) and reference managers
• ../../resources/official-source-map.md — Mind's accessibility expectation and word limit